Overall I think you need to work more on your composition. The only one of the group that shows any composition is the 4th one. The asymmetrical quality of the 4th picture is nice but, the angle on her face is all wrong. When taking a picture of a model composition is not the only thing you have to worry about, you also have to worry about angles that compliment your model, her features and her figure.
Another thing that bothered me about your photos is your wardrobe choice. While the first dress is fine I feel the second one, the one with the stripes, does nothing for your models figure and is more distracting in your pictures than anything else. I would suggest picking dresses with less pattern, more defined shape and pairing them with accessories like belts, stockings and necklaces.
Over all you need improvement but you do have potential. Play with your angels a bit more and work on composition and don't be afraid to step outside your comfort zone.
Fashion photography, right?
ReplyDeleteOverall I think you need to work more on your composition. The only one of the group that shows any composition is the 4th one. The asymmetrical quality of the 4th picture is nice but, the angle on her face is all wrong. When taking a picture of a model composition is not the only thing you have to worry about, you also have to worry about angles that compliment your model, her features and her figure.
Another thing that bothered me about your photos is your wardrobe choice. While the first dress is fine I feel the second one, the one with the stripes, does nothing for your models figure and is more distracting in your pictures than anything else. I would suggest picking dresses with less pattern, more defined shape and pairing them with accessories like belts, stockings and necklaces.
Over all you need improvement but you do have potential. Play with your angels a bit more and work on composition and don't be afraid to step outside your comfort zone.